Smoking should be illegal!

In the last 6 weeks Rimu was working on how to write and create and persuasive speeches, there was no specific topic to write about so I decided to write about why Smoking Should Be Illegal.

Lots of people die because of smoking each year and it is expensive and an unhealthy habit, so that's why I feel that smoking should be illegal.

Here is my speech, for why I think Smoking Should Be Illegal.

What I did really well is that I spoke clearly and was looking to the audience and not looking at the cards too much.

The things I want to work on is: 

Getting the audience hooked in.

Speak with expression and change tone as appropriate.

Use body language like gestures.

How do you think I did?