This week Rimu class have been doing the 100WC. This is my one which has 97 words in it. This is something that people all around the world do and we get comments from teacher and students from different countries. Also, it makes us think lots about our vocabulary.
One day Joe and I went to rugby training together.
When it ended we decided to go to the library,
on our way we saw a boy who was smoking and a bit of the flame dropped on his pants and started a fire. As the flame flickered and then went out. Lucky the boy wasn’t burnt but his pants had a hole in it. When we went to the library I got a book out by Richie McCaw for a project at school. When we came back we took the bus and went home.
There are some interesting ideas here Shukoor. I would love to know if you had them connected somehow in your mind. Nice to see that you attended rugby training and the library all in one day.
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Great story here Shukoor i'm not saying your the best story writer in the world but this is pretty good i love the way you said 'But the flame drooped' in my opinion you should put 'But the flame drooped...' i would love to she more short and sharp storys on your blog.
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