Shukoor - I enjoyed reading your poetry anthology. You did a good job with the personification, this is a really useful writing tool. Keep up the great writing. :)
Hi Shukoor, I am a year 5 student from South Hornby School I really like your anthology poem. I like the way that you described your friend Tim. Next time I think you should write a little bit more on the quatrain poem. In your presentation you wrote about soccer. Do you like soccer? Because I like soccer
Hi Shukoor. I am Dom from South Hornby School. I like the way that you used your descriptive words. Next time you should include more adjectives. Come check my blog out at http://shsdominich.blogspot.co.nz/. can't wait to hear back from you.
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ReplyDeleteI love soccer and thanks for the suggestions.
ReplyDeleteShukoor - I enjoyed reading your poetry anthology. You did a good job with the personification, this is a really useful writing tool. Keep up the great writing. :)
ReplyDeleteHi Shukoor, I am a year 5 student from South Hornby School I really like your anthology poem. I like the way that you described your friend Tim. Next time I think you should write a little bit more on the quatrain poem.
ReplyDeleteIn your presentation you wrote about soccer. Do you like soccer? Because I like soccer
Hi Shukoor. I am Dom from South Hornby School. I like the way that you used your descriptive words. Next time you should include more adjectives. Come check my blog out at http://shsdominich.blogspot.co.nz/. can't wait to hear back from you.
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